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Evidence of Absence: 5

Jeff Suwak
2 min readSep 7, 2020

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Photo by Zdeněk Macháček on Unsplash

Part 4 is here.

Jim turned as well to see a brown bear less than a hundred feet down the slope from them. He never felt comfortable getting this close to bears in the wild, but he also knew that they were rarely aggressive, especially when multiple people were present. It was a situation to take seriously but not one to panic over.

He held up a hand to calm Redling. He didn’t have to look to his client to feel the fear emanating from him.

“Easy now. It probably got curious about our scent. It looks mean, but that bear’s probably more scared than we are right now.”

The bear huffed loudly. It clacked its jaw and swayed its massive head back and forth.

“Easy,” Jim said.

Jim directed the command at Redling, but he never took his eyes off the bear.

“It looks scary, but that’s bluffing behavior. It’s trying to be intimidating, which means it doesn’t want a confrontation. Stay cool.”

No sooner had Jim finished his statement than Redling’s rifle cracked off a round.

The bear jerked aside slightly as the round caught its shoulder. With that, the bluffing was over. The bear charged.

Redling staggered to his feet and fell onto his back. He fired off another shot as he hit the ground, but…

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